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Recently the issue of whether accept equal number of male and female student in every subjects has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.As more and more subjects can be wield by male.There would seem to be less and less need for female to be present.However,male will never replace female because female is a big part of what is needed in global market.
According to a survey in china 100 percent of teacher is teaching in the university understand that significant of female students.74 percent of them like those students more than male students.The female student not only do their work carefully but also most of them can lay much emphasis on their study.
But some conservative opinion is consider that most of male students more suitable for some subjects such as mathematic and science education.Whereas,they lay too much emphasis on the talents of students,they ignore that science and mathematic education need more exact detail calculation

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第一段抄的不错 第二段开始就露底了 你的语法很差 而且虽然你知道用survey 但根本不理解survey的本质
你模仿的空有其表 也就6分吧