英语作文,求改错.

题目

英语作文,求改错.
From the point of view of money,I'm really very poor.But in another sense,I'm very rich.Because the fullness of heart quiet ,I am rich,because I enjoy books,I am rich,because my soul flies and rising wealth,I am rich.
When my friends are happy of having a wardrobe of fashion clothes ,I also proud of my several books.When my friends wear Gorgeous clothes,I wear plain clothes and keep cool.When friends spend time to linger in the fashion shop,I'm in the bookstore.
When some people rich with only the money,I am glad I am not.I am glad I can have a complete and peaceful heart.I am glad that my soul can freely fly.I am glad that I can roam in my own love of books and be a richer.

答案

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心灵平静用tranquility,精神满足用spiritual fullfilment
第一句语序可以改成I‘m poor in money but rich in another sense.
enjoy reading books
灵魂飞翔不知所谓呀
后面的再看,我休息会儿