有没grammar错误

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有没grammar错误
我希望你能把我们牢记在心,同时我期望能跟你们公司建立一种良好的合作关系
I hope you will keep us in mind and look forward to establishing a friendly co-operation relationship with your company

答案

你就说We've been looking forward to establishing a business relationship with your company.前面那句多余,而且不符合英文的习惯.商务英语要简洁明了.