高二的英语短文改错,

题目

高二的英语短文改错,
短文如下：
①Tired men was disscussing how to donate money to ②God ,and at first they couldn`t agree with each other .③Then each told their own idea .The first man suggested ④drawing a circle on the ground and throw coins .The ⑤money out the circle belonged to God .The second ⑥man add ,"We will donate coins inside the circle to ⑦God because God is in our heart ." The third man said ,⑧" Your ideas are not bad ,though I have a better one .⑨Let`s throw coins into the sky .Those who God accepts ⑩belong to him .So God can accept so much money as he can ." At last they began throwing coins into the sky happily .
短文共分为10小段,每小段有一个错误或无错误,无错误的打勾,错误的写出改正方法.

答案

1 was--were 因为后面有提到they2 and--but 这个句子由句意来看是不需要并列链接的,but表示转折关系,这些人要给上帝捐钱但是无法达成共识3 each--his 因为each已经表示了是这么多人中的一个,之前又提到了tired ...