这句英文有没有更好的写法

题目

这句英文有没有更好的写法
The audit work involves performing audit procedures in order to acquire the relevant amount of the financial statement and the disclosure of audit evidence.

答案

目的状语的句子太长,可以做一下修改：状语提前,用逗号隔开,读的时候有停顿；in order to 可以直接改为toTo acquire the relevant amount of the financial statement and the disclosure of audit evidence,the audi...