英语翻译

题目

英语翻译
在市场竞争日趋激烈的今天,如何提高业务运转效率是一个永恒的课题,传统的库存管理方式存在录入数据容易出错或重复、纸质文档的存放中容易受到损坏且占空间、文档管理以及信息查询极其繁琐与不便、报表制作非常复杂且耗时、无法对整个流程进行有效监管等诸多缺点,已经越来越不适应企业的需求；在此背景下,库存管理系统应用而生,本文介绍的“智脑”库存管理系统就是这样一类的系统.它基于.Net2.0框架、C#语言、SQL SERVER2005数据库快速开发,采用B/S架构,是一款针对中小型单一仓库进行管理的低成本高效系统.
关键词：权限控制、数据库、响应速度、B/S架构.
翻译的英语：
Today,we are facing a more and more intense competition of market,how to improve business operational efficiency will be an eternal subject.The traditional type of inventory management has many shortcomings,such as,the input data is error-prone or redundancy,the paper documents are easy to be damaged and they take space,document management and data query is very inconvenient,the employers can not effective monitor the whole business process,etc.As this type of management is becoming more and more difficult to adapt company's demands,people create and develop the Inventory Manage System to solve this problem."Smart Brain" inventory manage system is this type of system that designed for the small or medium warehouse to efficient run business .The "Smart Brain" system is developed by using the C# programming language(based on the Net2.0 framework ) and SqlServer2005 database,and it uses the B/S architecture.
Keywords:access control,database,speed of response,B/S mode.

答案

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第六行：company's demands（应为companies' demands)
第七行：this problem（应为these problems)因为前文为“诸多缺点”.ently run business