高考英语作文

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高考英语作文
假如你是李华,对今年一月出现的严重雾霾记忆犹新,认为绿色生活方式对于改善空气质量十分有益.请根据下列要点写一篇短文,向校刊“英语角”栏目投稿.
简述雾霾情况 倡导绿色生活
持续三周左右
影响全国多地 乘坐公交出行
乘坐公交出行 节约水电纸张
注意：1．词数：100左右； 2．可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Greener Air,Cleaner Life（标题是题目带的）
Smog is serioius,with many kinds of diseases,really affect people’s lives.Smog means serious air pollution,and we can’t live without air.Dirty air is harmful to our bodies.Recently,heavy smog arrives in our country,which remains three week long.
The heavy smog affect many places in China.Northern China,such as Capital Beijing,has been under serious pollution.Even towns in the southeast are under smog.Drivers werenot able to see views clearly,and children were encouraged to stay at home.People who wanted to get ourdoor exercise hesitated,and everyone was not happy when they see the grey sky.
I advocate that we live a cleaner life.Taking buses instead of driving cars seems a good idea,and recycled water is also a must.Picking up waste paper on the floor a

答案

Smog is serioius, （with）【which bring】 many kinds of diseases, really affect people’s lives. 评价：开头朴实,最好用点花哨的东西,至少得从句吧- -修改：Smog means serious air pollution, and we can’t ...