求英语高手帮忙判断下面几个句子又没语病,或者是否合适

题目

求英语高手帮忙判断下面几个句子又没语病,或者是否合适

I am writing for the sake of...

why is there such a result?

We can do better and better in (dealing with) this issue

I am among the faithful fance of you

Finally but equally important...

I am eager to join a powerful company like yours.

I merit your consideration.

如果有语病的话要怎么改,

答案

第二句中 特殊疑问句应该用陈述语气,why there is such a result?
最后一句应该是 i deserve your consideration