一段英语作文帮忙看看哪里有错误 有赏

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一段英语作文帮忙看看哪里有错误 有赏
John Gurdon ranked last out of the 250 boys in his Eton year group at biology.His schoolmaster told him he was too stupid to study the subject.However,sixty-five year later,he awarded the Noble Prize in medicine for his pioneering work on cloning,telling us that success depends on hard working and perseverance instead of talent.
修改到50词以下 观点明确 主要就是要表明小时候笨 但依靠努力毅力啊后获得举目的成就
另外哪里可以找到英语有关 乐观 快乐 学习 成功挫折 等等题材的小短文 美文美句 作文可以用的

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John Gurdon ranked last out of the 250 boys in his Eton year group at biology.
His schoolmaster have told him he did not have the gift of study the subject
However,sixty-five year later,he awarded the Noble Prize in medicine for his pioneering work on cloning,telling us that success depends on hard working and perseverancet rather than talent.