英语高手来帮我看看我写的是不是正确

题目

英语高手来帮我看看我写的是不是正确
今天我要做morning reporter.
请大家看看帮我改改,
错的请写出来,如果能说明为什么那更好了.
Today,I'm on duty.First,I will tell you something about weather.Yesterday,it was sunny and warm.Today,it is sunny and warm,too.Tmomorrow it will be raining.Then,I will tell you a story:
A wolf been badly wounded by dogs.He lay sick and maimed his lair.He felt very hungry and thirsty.When a sheep passed by,he asked him to fetch some water from the stream.
"If you bring me the water," he said,"I will find means to get some food."
"Yes," said the sheep,"if I bring you the water,you would undoubtedly make me your food."

答案

1.about the weather.
2.Today,it is sunny and warm,too...重复,可以改成..so s it today.
3.I'll find the way to get some food.
4.结尾:that's all,Thank you.