哪位同学可以帮我修改一下英语作文?

题目

哪位同学可以帮我修改一下英语作文?
正文：
She became an astronaut because it's her dream and she's interested in space when she was a little girl.She is the US's second female astronaut,and she stayed in space station for seven days.She has ever trained for three years and she became a flight engineer.In space,although that she didn't do space walks ,but she still felt
happy.She said it's funny to live in space station.And you must be careful when you re eatting,or food will fly aronud.

答案

became 改成 becomes
she stayed 中间加 has
years and she 中and 改成since
but 去掉
eatting 改成 eating