求批改英语作文.

题目

求批改英语作文.
How is going?Our teacher read your exceptionally well-written essay yesterday.When it's over,I know I was impressed by your exceptionally well-written essay.I feel it very beautiful.I believe that everyone can feel it.
What's more I have learned lots of things form Mr.Fleagle's comments on his essay since it over .It can be seen as follow.On the one hand,no pains,no gains.Mr.Fleagle have recognized your efforts.I also work-harding in the next time.I believe that I can do it!Efforts make success!On the other hand,I learned something about how to get on well with my friends.We should learn to share with others.
I'm looking forward to your letter as soon as possible
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点建议也行啊
语法错误 来点新颖句子也行

答案

句子比较简单,以主语I开始的太多,可以换个说法.