刚写的GRE AWA 麻烦G友们帮忙看下能得几分?

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刚写的GRE AWA 麻烦G友们帮忙看下能得几分?
刚限时写的一篇argument,字数比较少328,不知道怎么样...issue基本没练,全靠这个了,高手帮看下能得几分儿啊...11号考了,很急
The following appeared in an editorial in a business magazine. “Although the sales of Whirlwind video games have declined over the past two years, a recent survey of video-game players suggests that this sales trend is about to be reversed. The survey asked video-game players what features they thought were most important in a video game. According to the survey, players prefer games that provide lifelike graphics, which require the most up-to-date computers. Whirlwind has just introduced several such games with an extensive advertising campaign directed at people 10 to 25 years old, the age-group most likely to play video games. It follows, then, that the sales of Whirlwind video games are likely to increase dramatically in the next few months."
In the argument, the arguer states that the declined trend of sales of Whirlwind will reversed, it means that the sales of Whirlwind

答案

可以看的出你的语感还是比较顺的.但是用词比较单调,文章又属于模板式,所以需要词汇出彩才可能高分,如果能添一些高级词汇,比如说他 unwarranted,或unsubstantiated之类,nothing more than a speculation的话,总之多变化,会更好.而且字数上能再添一段他的defect或者最后建议加一点最好.我个人觉得在3.5-4.5之间.当然,作文很多时候看运气的.一个第一次考了作文5分的,第二次考2.5的大有人在.所以也不一定我的分就是对的,重要的是考前要自信,要淡定.以你的这种写法,如果碰上文章的弱点全部被你hit到的话,高分也是有可能的.