书面表达（共1小题；满分20分）在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮，但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是…

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书面表达（共1小题；满分20分）
在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮，但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是……，成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以I Am Not a Child Any More为题，记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已经不再是一个下孩子。
要求：1.请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，不少于80词；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计算
I am not a child any more,

答案

I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.
It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet.
My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.

解析

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。记述成长过程中的一件或是两件难忘的事，根据材料提示完成写作，并适当发挥。写作过程中注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:：used to“过去常常”；not...until“直到……才”；not...any more“不再”；grow up“长大”等以及一些复合句的使用。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。