【写作内容】你叫Jack,由于父母到中国工作，暂时寄读于某所中学。在学校食堂用餐一段时间后，你觉得有必要向学校食堂管理处反映一些问题，于是决定给管理处的黄先生写
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【写作内容】
你叫Jack,由于父母到中国工作，暂时寄读于某所中学。在学校食堂用餐一段时间后，你觉得有必要向学校食堂管理处反映一些问题，于是决定给管理处的黄先生写封信，信中包括如下内容：
1.学校食堂的优点：食堂干净,饭菜可口,服务员总是衣着整洁、面带微笑,服务态度好。
2.学校食堂的不足之处：价格偏高；等候时间较长,学生常常得等候近30分钟才能买到饭菜。
3.建议：尽快解决上述问题；希望及时加热饭菜，特别是在冬天时，这样才能确保学生健康。
【写作要求】
用五句话表达上表的全部内容，并组成一篇连贯的短文。（信的开头已经给出，不计入句数）
【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Mar.26th, 2012源]
Dear Mr. Huang,
I’m Jack, a student in Class 2, Senior 3. I’m writing to tell you my opinions and expectation of the school canteen.
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Thanks for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Jack |
答案
Dear Mr.Huang,
I’m Jack, a student in Class 2, Senior 3. I’m writing to tell you my opinions and expectation of the school canteen.
In general, we are satisfied with the clean and tidy dining hall, its delicious food and the good service from the smiling waiters who are always neatly dressed. However, what is not to our satisfaction is that the price of the meal is a little too high and that we can only have a limited variety of dishes to choose from. In addition, students often have to wait in line for about 30 minutes before getting their food. We would greatly appreciate it if the problems mentioned above can be solved as soon as possible. Finally, I would like to suggest to you that the food should be heated in time to ensure the students’ health, especially in winter.
Thanks for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Jack |
解析
试题分析：题目要求就学校食堂的状况，给食堂管理处写一封信。信的要点已经给出，主要说明优缺点并提出建议。注意写作要求：用五句话表达所给要点，写作时注意语篇的连贯性。
【亮点说明】范文注意使用In general, However, In addition, Finally等短语衔接句子和段落，做到了连贯通顺；
范文使用了较多的短语a variety of, choose from, wait in line, as soon as possible, would like to, in time等，基础知识掌握得比较扎实；范文还用到了许多语法知识，像固定句型are satisfied with, 定语从句who are always neatly dressed, 主语从句what is not to our satisfaction, 表语从句that the price of the meal is..., 固定句型would appreciate it if..., 虚拟语气suggest that the food should be等，体现了灵活驾驭语法知识的能力；范文还注意使用especially来加强语气。 |
举一反三
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Mountain climbers around the world dream about going up Qomolangma, the highest mountain in the world. But many people who have climbed the mountain have left waste material that is harming the environment.
A team of Americans is planning the largest clean-up effort ever on Qomolangma. They will make the risky trip up the mountain next month.
The team of eight Americans will be guided by more than twenty Sherpas of Nepal(尼泊尔夏尔巴人). Their goal is to remove all the rubbish they see. They will spend two months cleaning up the mountain by gathering oxygen bottles, fuel containers, batteries, drink cans, human waste and all kinds of disposable products(一次性产品). They are expected to remove at least three tons of rubbish in large bags.
Team leader Robert Hoffman is making his fourth trip up the mountain. He says he hopes to bring Qomolangma to the condition it was in before the first successful climb fifty years ago. He says he hopes the effort will influence other people to clean up the environment closer home.
Disposable products on Qomolangma are a major concern. So the clean-up team will take along newly developed equipment to collect and treat disposable products. Over the years, the disposable products have polluted the mountain. In the warm season when the ice melts, the polluted water flows to Nepali villages below. The problem has gotten worse in recent years because climbing Qomolangma has become more popular.
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括短文内容要点；
2．以约120个词就 “Cleaning the World”这个主题写一篇短文，并包括如下要点：
（1）你所居住的地方周围存在怎样的环境问题？
（2）你认为这个问题是什么造成的？
（3）为帮助解决这一问题，你做了什么？
【写作要求】
1.可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。 |
众所周知，2012年11月9日党的十八大报告中提出了建设“美丽中国”的理念。近来，我校也围绕这一主题积极开展美丽校园的活动。作为一名高中生，请你就如何美化校园谈谈个人看法和建议。
内容要点：1.遵守校纪校规。 （如：凭电子学生证进出校园，升旗和早操做到快、齐、静……）
2．言行举止文明优雅，讲究卫生，爱护公物。
3．有良好的精神面貌，穿戴整洁干净，穿校服进出校园。
注意： 1. 词数120左右。
2 .文章的开头已经给出（不计入总词数），可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．参考词：rules and regulations（规章制度），Electronic student ID（电子学生证）
mental outlook(精神面貌)
Recently, our school has been carrying out some meaningful activities to beautify the schoolyard…__________________________________________________________________________________
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请你根据以下表格提示，写一篇120词左右的英语短文，并阐明自己从中得到的启发。
时间
| 2006年9月28日
| 地点
| 美国佛罗里达州（Florida）
| 事件
| 超过二十一万名中学生参加一项集体朗诵活动
| 结果
| 缔造不同地点、同时（simultaneously）大声朗读同一篇文章的吉尼斯世界记录
| 意义
| 培养学生的阅读兴趣和合作精神
| 对你的启发
| ……
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请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。
You may talk a lot in life, but you must learn to listen.
注意：
①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右。 |
有人说，“Money can’t buy happiness”；也有人说“Money can talk”，请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。
注意：词数120~150； |
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