If one has no confidence, there is little possibility that one can achieve anyth

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If one has no confidence, there is little possibility that one can achieve anything when faced with hardships.
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
⑤词数120左右。

答案

One possible version:
Whatever one does, one should do it with confidence. Equipped with confidence, we can deal with any challenges and difficulties until we succeed.
When I entered Senior 3, I found myself faced with difficulty learning English, and even failed in my English exam. As a consequence I began to feel frustrated, losing confidence in myself. It was at this moment that my parents encouraged me, and my teachers gave me some valuable advice on my studies, telling me to be confident. With their help, I regained my confidence and began to make steady progress.
As the saying goes, where there’s a will, there’s a way. If we are to make a difference, we should build up our confidence, which is of vital importance if we want to overcome any obstacles and finally achieve our goal.

解析

试题分析：话题作文要求考生根据英文提示，结合生活中的一个事例，根据所给的英语提示，写一篇话题作文。这种“开放式”的论述文的命题形式给考生很大的自由发挥空间，对写作的布局谋篇提出了较高要求，要求考生既要会发表观点认识，又要会进行描写叙述。这种写作命题有利于立体考查学生的语言知识、创新思维能力和价值观，具有较强的选拔功能。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如Equipped with confidence, make a difference还运用了It was at this moment that强调句型; which引导的非限制性定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：As the saying goes，As a consequence等等。
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