i have a lot of money

题目

i have a lot of money
If I have a lot of money,I will do something I love.
When I grow up,I think I will be rich.If I have a lot of money,I will do many things.First I will help old people in the Old People's Homes.I know old people often feel lonely,so if I have a lot of money,I will buy many TVs for them.If I'm free,I will go to the Old People's Homes to talk with them.
If I have a lot of money,I will help poor children as good as possible.I know many children in mountain valleges are too poor to go to school.So if I'm rich,I will give much money and many books to them to open thier eyes.
If I have a lot of money,I will buy a big house for my family.And I will go sightseeing around the world with my parents.
I think the dreams are really beautiful,I believe it will come ture.

答案

我同意楼上的一点就是要在old people,poor children前加定冠词the,至于后面的我有不同的观点,我认为in mountain valleges,open their eyes这些短语是没问题的.
不错哦,加油o(∩_∩)o...