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英语作文 看看有没有语法错误 还有标点符号哈
Dear Mon and Dad,
The time has come.I`m graduating,and I thank you both for all your help during these 15 years.I still remember when you used to say,"You can be whatever you want"I`m so glad you are my parents,especially when I hear kids say that they don`t get on well with theirs.I`m glad that you support me when i decide to do anything .You always try to help and that`s important to me.
Dad,i remember when you first took me fishing.I loved going even though i never caught anything.I also remember when you would get angry with me .L realized you were only trying to show me the right way.When i would cry ,you would always be there to try to cheer me up.That`s what i call a good ,loving ,caring dad .Sometimes you and MOn don`t agree with me,but you are there by my side in anything i do,and that`s why i love you so much.
打不动了...先写愣个多嘛.

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Dear Mom and Dad,The time is coming.I`m under graduate and I thank you both for all your help during these 15 years.I still remember when you said,"You can be whatever you want" I`m so glad you are my...