描写动物在干什么的英语作文

题目

描写动物在干什么的英语作文
题目是动物园（zoo）
内容是在动物园看到动物分别在干什么,两只熊猫在爬树,一些猴子在荡秋千,两只大象在喝水,一直袋鼠在跳,鸟在飞

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Before visiting the zoo,I had no idea how informative a visit to a zoo might be. Though the zoo I have visited is not big, I found many kinds of interesting animals and other creatures there. Lions, tigers and other animals were moving about lazily in their cages. Some of the animals appeared to be bored, and they took little interest in the visitors. The monkeys, however, showed their natural agility. Whenever they saw a visitor, they ran towards him and begged for something to eat. I was indeed amused at their behavior. Most of them were caught in Malaysia and their variety was amazing.But the most inportant is I like animals very much.
Some of the birds too were very interesting to see. Their beautiful feathers fascinated me. Birds are indeed one of the loveliest creations of god. A few birds are larger than many animals.
The lions and the tigers in this zoo were so docile that I could not but treat them as domestic animals like the dog and the cat. I went very close to them, but they showed little interest in me. I then began to think of how the animal or even human spirit could be broken by confinement. Confined to their cages, these animals had become spiritless. Even the sight of food did not see to excite them much.
Then, there was the crocodile with its usual pretence of innocence. It refused to be disturbed. Heaven knows how it might have reacted if a child had fallen into its pit. However, my visit to the zoo had increased my knowledge of animals
以上部分是我复制的,下面的是我自己写得,你可以参考下,我本人是英语专业的.
Today I went to the zoo,there were many lovely animals. Two pandas were climbing tree, some monkeys were swing, two elephants were drinking water, a kangaroo were jumping, and some birds were flying.
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