请问这几句话用英语是这么说吗?

题目

请问这几句话用英语是这么说吗?
这几句话,
警察们在哪里最早明确说过 : Tom的东西是在Street Garden找到的,以及他的住址是Street Garden?
似乎在1990年2月的报告中说得并不明确. 在此之前,警察们明确说过此事吗?
用英语是这么说吗?
Where the Cops first clearly stated : Tom's things found in the Street Garden, and his address was Street Garden?
It seems that the report was not clear in February 1990. Prior to this, the Cops clearly said this it?
请问,有需要改的地方吗? "警察们"前不加 the 行吗?

答案

first clearly 是状语,应放在动词 stated ,最好是Where was it that the Cops stated the first clearly that Tom's things found in the Street Garden, and his address was Street Garden?这样更地道. "警察们"前...