英语翻译

题目

英语翻译
我就是英语大白.还有什么要改的也请大家多多指教.
正文：非常高兴能给大家做自我介绍.我叫······,来自辽西地区魅力滨城葫芦岛,考上沈阳音乐学院民族声乐系（这个第一节刚教过所以要用）我非常自豪.,因为我真的酷爱音乐!我希望音乐能伴我一生,我也会努力做好每一件事.跟大家一样,我一直对大学生活充满期待,希望我非常精彩的度过这大学四年,也希望能给大家带来欢乐.

答案

Hello, very glad to introduce myself to you. My name is · · · · · ·, from western Liaoning charm city of Huludao, admitted to the Shenyang Conservatory of Music National Vocal Music Department (the first day just taught so use) I am very proud of. , because I really love music! I hope the music with my life, I will try my best to do every thing. Like everyone else, I have been full of look forward to university life, I hope very wonderful through the University for four years, also hope to be able to bring you joy. Thank you