帮我找出这两篇英语作文有没有语法错误如果有,帮我纠正.

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帮我找出这两篇英语作文有没有语法错误如果有,帮我纠正.
My National Day's plan
National Day is coming.Here's my National Day 's Plan.
I will have a visit to Beijing for five days.Then I will go to the Great Wall take Photos,and i will go tothe TianAn Men Squre see the Chinese national flag.At the noon.I will go to the restaurant have lunch.At the afternoon,I will go back the hotel.
Next day,we also goto visit the city.I'm going to have many delicious foods.and I will read the books.At the afternoon,I will have a good rest.
This is my National Day's plan.I hope i will have a good time.
I konw this city
I'mthe Cinese girl.I live in Guangzhou.Guangzhou is the beautiful city.There are many beautiful places and flowers.
Guangzhou very famous places is Baiyun Hill.Baiyun Hill is the big hill.There are many people go sightseeing for Baiyun Hill.
The city flower of Guangzhou is
.The flower of Guangzhou is very much.T love Guangzhou all flower.Because the flowers are very beautiful and cute.So i like all the flowers.
In winter ,Guangzhou is won't snowy.But weather is very coid.People want wear more warm clothes.All plants are fade.
I like Guangzhou,because Guangzhou is very interesting and beautiful.
I prlde myself live in Guangzhou.

答案

第二段：你很不习惯用to.第二段掉了几个to来表示目的的.to take photos,to see the chinese national flag,to have lunch,go back to the hotel.这些to都不可以少的!at noon之间不需要the,应该用in the afternoon.第...