英语翻译

题目

英语翻译
当我真正地想为她做点事时,一切太晚了.我看到她安静地躺在床上,脸色苍白,全身冰冷,我才知道生命的倒计时谁也无法控制.
如果有来生,我希望我还能做回你的孙女,让我好好照顾你
When i wanted to do some nice things for her ,it was too late.I saw she was lying in bed quietly ,her face turn grey ,.全身冰冷at that monent,i realized that nobody can control the count down of life
如果有来生.I hope i am still your granddaughted,let me take good care fo you
上面这样翻译感觉有错误,请帮忙纠正,还有,“如果有来生”"全身冰冷"这两句话怎么翻译比较恰当呢?

答案

I wanted to do something for her but it was too late.I saw she was lying in bed,her face was pale,her body was cold.Not untill that moment did I realize that nobody can control the count down of life.
If I have a future life,I wish that I can still be your granddaughter and take good care of you.