Looking for a pan friend(English)!

题目

Looking for a pan friend(English)!
I am a college student(Grade 2),I want to communicate with someone in English in order to improve my English.(Honestly speaking,I am weak in speaking English and writting.)But I havn't such a friend.So I come to write this note,hoping that there is someone who are willing to communicate with me in English every week or once a month.I suggest that we write to each other by E-mails,and if there is opporitunity,we'll communicate in voice-chatting room,of course,I wish I can make such a friend.Maybe there are mistakes in my presentation,could you point it out,please?
Merry Christmas,everyone~

答案

Your english is very good.
Just some couple of questions:
Which college are you from? What is your profession?
Your English is very formal,and this kind of formal language is usually for resumes or some very serious writing. So,why don't you losen up a little bit.
Anyways... Merry Christimas 2 u 2...