急求一篇英语作文,在线等~~~要求如下

题目

急求一篇英语作文,在线等~~~要求如下
Should
students who work very hard in a course earn very high grades, or should
achievement rather than effort determine students’ grades? Plan and write an
essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your
position with reasoning and examples taken from your observations, experience,
studies, or reading.

答案

I think we should achivevment rather effort determine students` grades.
Because when student graduate facing the outside world,many thing decided by results,maybe sometime this way is unfair but it`s fact and they can not change temporary,so if
we chose achievement,studeny can get use to it more earlier,like some mental exercises,can be more stornger when they graduate.
Meanwhile hard work make achievement,and if it not ,it will finally.so by hard working or achivevment actualy is the same at last,just let the student be more stronger mental by achivevment way.