英语短文改错,共十处D I would like to tell you something more about our school sports meet

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英语短文改错,共十处D I would like to tell you something more about our school sports meet
Dear Jim,
I would like to tell you something more about our school sports meet.It was holding on Oct.6th,it was a fine day.There were over 1000 student and teachers attended it .Wang Lin ,a student from my class won the 100-meters race.He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record.The sports meet was really success.That was because we were all trying to do my best .Although I was not one of the winner,I was proud of that we had done
Looking forward to receive your letter
Yours,Li Ping

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Dear Jim,（首段顶格）I would like to tell you something （more去掉） about our school sports meet.It was holding（改成held,因为这是被动语态） on Oct.6th,（加and,因为这是并列分句） it was a fine day.Th...