求大神我改篇英语作文

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求大神我改篇英语作文
In my childhood,the most important thing to me is my cousin,he knows how to share and be tolerant of people,because of this he in my childhood has left a deep impression In my childhood,my cousin always influence character by environment's taught me a lot and still let me benefit.Because of my church several years older than I am,he always can be in many ways and I sometimes will take the initiative to me,this let me good habit from childhood learned humility.Not only that in childhood Chudo brother also taught me how to help and support oneself,what I have felt admire habit cousin in childhood and know how to use,that is why the cousin is the most important person in my childhood.
One thing cuz I admired that once I want to eat ice cream but no money,my cousin told me there is a grass mowing can be sold for money we can sell and buy ice cream.So we have to work but I soon tired,do not want to do and then give up,but my cousin has been trying to mow grass can buy ice cream until the exercise date,the last cousin gave me an ice cream.I asked him:"why so hard." "No pains,No gains "

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在我的童年,我最重要的事情是我的表弟,他知道如何分享和宽容的人,因此他在我的童年已在我的童年留下了深刻的印象,我表妹总是由环境影响特征；的教会我很多,也让我受益.因为比我大几岁的我的教会,他总是会在很多方面...