谁能帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误

题目

谁能帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误
Holle.I am a student of Grade eight.
I like play basketball and play computer games.
My Favorite subject is P.E.Because it can help me keep healthy.
My favorite color is black,because it’s cool.
In ten years.I think I will be a teacher,because I can help many people.
I will live in Beijing.It’s really a beautiful city.
I will keep a dog,because it’s very lovelyIn my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps.
My English is not good ,So I will try my best to learn English .
My report end.Thanks .
Question
What do I like?
In ten years,What will I to be?
What color do I like?
Why do I want to be a teacher?

答案

I like play ingand playing computer games
My report ends