帮我看看我的英语作文有什么错字或病句

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帮我看看我的英语作文有什么错字或病句
when l met difficulty
everyone will have difficulties.many people are afraidof difficulties.in fact,difficulties are not hate.in the last maths exam.l got a ‘D’in maths .l felt very depressed and grieved.but l kown l must fighting.l do more maths exercises.last l made it .l never give way to fate.when wo met a difficulty,we should keep dispassion

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difficulties are not hate ---- we should not hate to meet difficultiesl got a ‘D’in maths --- i got a "D" (in maths可以删掉了因为前面提到了数学考试)l felt very depressed and grieved.--- i felt depre...