这篇英语作文有没有什么问题

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这篇英语作文有没有什么问题
With more than 1500 years history of the chinese paper cutting is one of the most popular folk arts in China.Especially in the Ming and Qing Dynasties.The color of paper cutting is red which symbolizing health and prosperity.People often use it to beautify the living enviroment and decorated the doors,windows and rooms.Especially during the spring festival and the wedding,in order to provide the festive atmosphere.Chinese paper cutting is very pupolar all over the world and which is presented foreigners as gifts.

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（1）首句有问题,正确的表达应该是：With more than 1500 years history,the chinese paper cutting is one of the most popular folk arts in China.
（2）两处含有Especially 表达都不太通顺,建议舍弃Especially用其他句式表达.
（3）The color of paper cutting is red 后面应该加一个逗号
（4）in order to provide the festive atmosphere中的in order to改为to