求改本句子的语法错误

题目

求改本句子的语法错误
If a girl seeks for the respect of her family,rather
than become an appendage to her husband,she should never give up her financial
independence.

答案

If a girl seeks for the respect of her family,rather
than become an appendage to her husband,she should never give up her financial
independence.
请改的
If a girl seeks for the respect of her family rather than becomes an appendage of her husband ,She will never give up her financial independence
句子意思：如果一个女孩子要追求她在家庭尊敬地位,而不是她丈夫的附属品,她将绝不会放弃她的经济独立..