帮我修改一下英语作文The Devil wears Prada的影评　谢谢

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帮我修改一下英语作文The Devil wears Prada的影评　谢谢
"The Devil wears Prada"has a high booking office which is the reason why I like the film very much.The actress Andy doesn't adapt to the circumstances in the computer at first.For the sake of following tidal current,shedetermines to transfom herself.However,she is gradually aware of the fact that her friends are far away from her even her boyfriend.Until she knows the origin of Miranda's position,does she give up her job.
\x05The actress Andy is not only beautiful but also smart and diligent.Nevertheless,the most signifigent character is the fact that she doesn't lose her soul'sorientation and complies with the soul"s call in the end.
\x05What we can learn from the film is that when we meet fame and wealth we shall consider whether we lose our kindness and beauty.

答案

票房一般用box office,不是booking office
朋友逐渐远离她：
she is gradually aware of the fact that she and her friends became further apart,这样说更能表现出逐渐远离的状态
当我们拥有了名誉和财富：
when we have fame and wealth 这里用have表示拥有
我们应当考虑我们是否失去了友善
we should consider whether we have lost our kindness and beauty,这里用的是现在完成时
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以上是我的看法,全文我都认真看了,写得真不错啊