麻烦各位帮忙检查一下这篇托福作文的语法错误,

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麻烦各位帮忙检查一下这篇托福作文的语法错误,
With the development of economy,the leadership skill has been increasingly concerned.When it comes to whether a leader should make his staff feels involved in a decision,quite a few people believe that the answer should be negative.They maintain that a leader should let his team members learn to obey orders rather than make their own decisions and only in this way they could form into a well-disciplined group.However,I personally disagree with this statement and there are two main reasons I will point out below.
First of all,by letting every member of the team participate in solving the problem a leader can collect all kinds of information and make an integrated decision,because when planning a project managers tend to consider more of the development strategies of a company and neglect the details of the plan,which may lead to failure of the whole project.Besides,a leader sometimes even doesn’t know how to carry out a plan in details,so he has to let his

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whether a leader should make his staff feels involved in a decision中的feel应该使用原型,这应该只是粗心所致,因为下面有类似的句子你使用的就是原型.文章写得很好呢,加油!