英语短文改错,一共有十处错误,谁会啊,我只找出几处,

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英语短文改错,一共有十处错误,谁会啊,我只找出几处,
One afternoon,when I were on my way home,the weather changed suddenly.Dark clouds were gathered.I began to feel worried so I didn't have a raincoat or umbrella withe me.It soon started to rain.Just when I was hurrying home,I heard of someone calling me from behind.I turned to have a look and find that he was Liu Wei,a good neighbour of mine.He offered to share his umbrella to me.We walked all the ways home.Without Liu Wei's help,I would have got wet to the skin.How thankfully I was for his help!

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更正在括号处标明,一共十处错误.
One afternoon,when I (was) on my way home,the weather changed suddenly.Dark clouds (去掉were) gathered.I began to feel worried (because) I didn't have a raincoat or (加入an) umbrella with me.It soon started to rain.Just when I was hurrying home,I heard (去掉of) someone calling me from behind.I turned to have a look and (found) that (it) was Liu Wei,a good neighbour of mine.He offered to share his umbrella (with) me.We walked all the (way) home.Without Liu Wei's help,I would have got wet to the skin.How (thankful) I was for his help!