帮忙修改一下这篇英语作文

题目

帮忙修改一下这篇英语作文
When we,the future of the flowers,wait for the blooming time,I am happy that I can sing the national anthem under the flag,I am happy that I could have born in this great country of five thousand years of history,I have much emotion With Watch the Beijing Olympics.
In 2008,China carried out the first time in its 29 th Olympic Games,it gives us a platform for playing let the world know us; it built a bridge for us,so we can better communicate with the world.I am proud of the motherland.
Indomitable purpose of the Chinese people,China's strong determination relying on the financial crisis through the climax.
I am glad I was born in China,I am glad I can assure the world that I love my motherland - China!

答案

As a flower of future waiting for the blooming time,i feel so happy that i can sing the national anthem under the national flag.i am so proud that i was born in this great country with a history of five thousand years.I'm excited about the beijing Olympics.
in 2008,china will host the 29th Olympic Games for the first time,which gives us a platform to show ourselves and let the world know us and builts a bridge for us to communicate with the world.
In the economic crisis,the Chinese people with indomitable spirit are through.
i am glad i was in born in china,and I am pleased to declare to the world that I am Chinese.