谁能帮我看看这篇文章有没有语法错误啊?

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谁能帮我看看这篇文章有没有语法错误啊?
I came to the institute of finance and economics are very happy!University life is a sacred place,where have students from different regions,different habits and ways of thinking,but we all have a common goal and that is for their own future fight; hard work of our hard indelible Quality.
Struggle is our dream of flying on the premise; ladder ladder has never been used to put the foot,and it is only people for the time being placed on the feet for a period of time,so that one foot up to Gordon; struggle is to dream of a bridge,Perseverance is the backwater of the achievements of the lever.Also remember that a sentence like the fall of the fruit does not belong to the spring flowers in the spring belongs to the people who work.Struggle is the dream of a bridge leading to the reality,it's the End of the World to close; without it can not be looking for wide-right close by home,as a result of the end of the road there are stumbling block,evil ways Jiuwang step quagmire.
Knowledge of the long river of raging torrents,like a sail against the current study does not advance,in rapids not stay for a while,it will drift a little loose.To move forward we must fight the struggle,we should strive to be updated,in order to fight the dream.
Life is like fertile land,in the hope that the seeds of knowledge,had plenty of fertile land without sowing,life will become a wasteland,only the hard planting,cultivation,harvest the fruit to get into university dream of flying,from every day The start bit by bit,Kennedy-top power-chu,so we have to master knowledge.
Knowledge is the foundation of our dreams,the struggle for the realization of the dream,the dream is hard Concerto.University is the realization of the dream stage at the university this stage in our own dreams and struggle hard to learn the hard side of his brilliant show,no dream is the future of the defect,entered the University of the day we To embrace the great dream.
Can look forward to the future,and we know how hard it is college students and young people's struggle,nothing can stop going to our success to achieve the dream of the road.
Dream of flying into the University,the cradle of the University of dreams,we can not do in front of more challenges ahead of us.

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好长!说实在的,我是一扫而过…上面的兄弟可别乱说哦,免及误人子弟～