请帮我看看这几句英语写得对不对

题目

请帮我看看这几句英语写得对不对
1.In the box,it's a book which I bought in America for my first time going there.
2.Look to this bar.Is it strange?
3.I hate them two!
4."新的一岁"怎么说?
5.in the new coming time（我想表达“在新到来的日子里”）
如果有错误请帮我纠正一下,

答案

1.In the box,there is a book which I bought in America at my first time going there.
2.Look this bar.Is it strange?
3
4 a new year
5 in the coming days