短文改错 l should tell you that l need some helps from you.lm going to take part in the chinese talent s

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短文改错 l should tell you that l need some helps from you.lm going to take part in the chinese talent show for foreigners in beijing in coming summer vocation.you know you have been learning chinese painting in the past two years andlm also good at singing,so l planned to show these talent.now lm really greatly need of two teachers whom are professional to guide me so that l can get a good grade.and l want l could top in the first three places.

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l should tell you that l need some ( help) from you.l'm going to take part in the chinese talent show for foreigners in beijing in ( the ) coming summer vocation.( I ) know you have been learning chinese painting in the past two years and l'm also good at singing,so l (am planning) to show ( this ) talent.now ( I ) really need ( the help ) of two teachers ( who ) are professional ( enough) to ( give ) me (adivce) so that l can get a good grade.l (hope) l could ( reach ) ( one of ) the first three places.