帮我改一下这篇英语作文,

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帮我改一下这篇英语作文,
My Friend
My frien name is John.He's my favorite friend.
John is 12 years old.He has big eyes,short hair.He's very naughty,but he's clever,too.His English is very good,but math is not better.He likes play piano,he learned it 8 years ago.He's very kind,so he has many friends.He's my classmaths.
This my friend,John.Do you want meet him?Hes very friendly,too!

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My Friend
My friend's name is John.He's my best(想说最好的朋友就是这个,那个一般不用这种说法) friend.
John is 12 years old.He has big eyes and short hair.He's very naughty,but he's clever.His English is very good,but his math is not good.He likes playing piano,he started to learn it 8 years ago.He's very kind,so he has many friends.He's my classmate.
This my friend,John.Do you want meet him?He's very friendly,too!