看看这几句英文句子对不对

题目

看看这几句英文句子对不对
He was attracted.He sat near it and began to play it.No one had taught him before,but he could play it!He also felt very happy.Perhaps it is the fate.Since then,Tony began to play the piano secretly.
I appreciate Tony very much
When he saw the piano,he was potty about music
Talent,diligence and perseverance make him become successful.
From Tony,I learn no matter how unlucky we are now ,one day ,we will find a world which just belongs to us.Insist on it and never give up.We will succeed

答案

make him become successful不太好,可改成lead him to success
然后是insist on it,你要表示的是坚持下去永不放弃,我觉得用keep trying比较好吧