帮我看一下这段英文有没有错误

题目

帮我看一下这段英文有没有错误
Duringmy intern,responsible for daily work of Food & Beverage Department.Thejob involves set all tables,lay cloths,busboys,dish up and clear table,etc.and also in charge of some promotional activities for holidays.With excellentplanning capability,I always created a surprise by a creative activity andmade them into practice.
淘宝某子简历给我做的英文简历　我说有很多语法错误　她死不认账　让我找英语专八的人确认
希望英语好的大家帮帮忙　　我把第一段挑出来给大家看看

答案

首句,responsible for daily work of Food & Beverage Department没有主语.Thejob involves Set all tables,lay all cloths,busboys(餐馆勤杂工,这个是名词放在这里不合适,其他都是动词,去掉这个句子就对了)dish up ...