求大神翻译.英文过去时态

题目

求大神翻译.英文过去时态
当我还上幼儿园的时候,每天起床的第一件事就是兴奋地跑出我所居住的房子,飞奔过过一片铺满的绿草和鲜花的鹅软石小径,然后去查看邮箱里是否有写给我的信件,你可以想象到每当我收到信封是那种难于言表的兴奋.

答案

When I was still at kindergarten, the first thing I did after waking up each day was running out of my residence eagerly, sprinting on a pebbled pathway with meadow on both sides to check whether there was any mail for me. You can picture the inexplicable excitement whenever I got a mail.
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