谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语短文有什么语法错误.

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谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语短文有什么语法错误.
Hello,everyone.
I am a sunny girl.My biggest feature is a pair of small eyes.My mother always says I laugh eyes like a crack,but I don’t think so.There are a lot of people say I like a Korean.I think no matter what other people say,do me the most beautiful!I also like reading books,I think I can learn a lot of things.I also like to travel,because travel can make people humble.My hobby is debate,I participated in this months the school debate tournament.I think the debates can exercise my eloquence.
This is me.Do you want to make friends with me?
That’s all.Thank you.

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