求英语高手帮我修改下这篇文章的语法和用词

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求英语高手帮我修改下这篇文章的语法和用词
In 1945,Japanese Canadians were allowed to have post-war freedom; furthermore,they can still stay in parts of Canada.For defeated country’s people,this decision was already very kind of Canada at that time.Later,about 40 years after,on September 22,1988,Canadian government apologized to all the Japanese Canadian with a package of $24 million to them.Moreover,those who deported to Japan and stripped of Canadian citizenship now had their citizenship back.So overall,Canadian actually admitted their inequity and was responsible for their behavior.

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In 1945,Japanese-Canadians were allowed to have post-war
freedom; furthermore,they can still stay in parts of Canada.For defeated people
living in Canada,this decision has been a very kind one already at that time.About
40 years after,on September 22,1988,Canadian government apologized to all
the Japanese-Canadian with a package of $24 million of them.Moreover,those
who deported to Japan and stripped of Canadian citizenship now had their
citizenship back.So overall,Canadian actually admitted their iniquity and was
responsible for their behavior.