英语作文,大意是要求归还高三体育课

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英语作文,大意是要求归还高三体育课
because time is nervous in grade three of high school,other teacher often occupy the P.E lesson.We think this is correct,because when we very hard,we need a lots of train and keep better state ,if your body don not good,you cannot better study.Because body is very important ,at last,we strong demand headmaster return P.E lessons.
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We are Senior Three students now,and we're always in a nervous and high pressure condition.However,we haven't enough time to relax and even are lack of sleep and sports.We have P.E lesson but it just performs practically no function because some of our teachers like to occupy P.E lesson.Even though our time is limited and we also need a lot of education and keep hard working,sports and relax are still playing an important role in students' life.It is said that strike a proper balance between work and rest.So that no matter how hard we students learn,we still hold the right of having the phisical education in order to help us relax and become more healthier.We are strongly hoping that headmaster can understand and support us.