大师,帮我看下这个中译英有哪些语法错误呢? 能否给个更标准的翻译呢?

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大师,帮我看下这个中译英有哪些语法错误呢? 能否给个更标准的翻译呢?
翻译这句中文： 我最大的优点是热心肠、外向,有时我喜欢读报纸,当我得知某人身患重病或者缺钱读书时,我会尽自己最大的努力捐款并呼吁朋友加入进来,帮助他人不仅很有意义,而且也逐渐成了我的生活习惯.在我闲暇时间,我喜欢旅游、打羽毛球以及与朋友交流.定期的锻炼让我保持健康、充满活力和乐观的心态.
My greatest merit is I am a girl with warm-hearted and outgoing. Sometimes I like reading the newspaper.And when I know someone sufferingfrom serious illness or lack of money to go to school, I will do my best todonate and appeal my friends to attend this activity.Helping others is not only meaningful , it could also gradually turn into a living habit of mine. In myspare time, I like traveling, playing badminton and communicating with friends.Regular exercises keep me in good health, full of energy and optimism.
上述翻译的英文有哪些错误呢? 大师能更标准的重新翻译上述的中文么?

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My greatest merit is I'm a warm-hearted and outgoing girl.Sometimes I read the newspaper,and when I know someone is suffering serious illness or having no money for school,I try my best to help them.N...