Dear teacher,

题目

Dear teacher,
I am a student who came to the Psychological Center on last week.Under your carefully help,I have successfully get out of confusion.I would like to extend my greatest appreciate for your help.
There was a time I always felt confused and over-burdened.You teach me when we are facing challenges we should embrace the strong faith that we are indomitable and invincible.Our only emery is ourselves.
I appreciate the opportunity of being your student.The experience will be unforgettable throughout my life.Now I am a confident girl who feels the world more beautiful than I ever seen.Please accept my sincerely gratitude.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming

答案

Dear teacher,
I am a student who came to the Psychological Center【去掉on】 last week. 【Under改成With】 your 【carefully改成careful】 help, I have successfully get out of confusion. I would like to extend my greatest 【appreciate 改appreciation】 for your help.
There was a time I always felt confused and over-burdened.You teach me when 【we are可省略】 facing challenges we should embrace the strong faith that we are indomitable and invincible. Our only 【emery改成enemy】 is ourselves.
I appreciate the opportunity of being your student. The experience will be unforgettable throughout my life【建议改成 This will be unforgettable experience of my life】. Now I am a confident girl who feels the world more beautiful than I 【加 have】ever seen. Please accept my sincerely gratitude.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming