请帮忙修改一下英文作文
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请帮忙修改一下英文作文
Playaholic is the new element,in which people do excessive activities,that cause stress and can be dangerous for health.
Therefore,the stress provokes health problem,like a heart problem.Apart from their healthy,the business executives have problems with their families,because the lack of communication.
On this occasion,there are some advices that makes better:writing important things of your life,like family celebrations
答案
Playaholic is the new element,in which people do excessive activities,that cause stress and can be harmful for health.
Therefore,the stress triggers health problem,such as heart diseases.Moreover,due to the lack of communication,problems are generated between enterpreneurs and their family members.
Under this circumstance,a piece of advice can converse this poor situation::writing important things of your life,including family and celebrations.
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