there are many old man doing exercise ,who look very strong.

题目

there are many old man doing exercise ,who look very strong.
这个句子为什么不对?这个不是定语从句吗?
there are many old men doing exerise，who look very strong。是这样。

答案

你这里用there be句型 强调的就是doing exercise了 而不是many old men .故who引导的定语就错了,而且句子前后出现了两个谓语动词,这也是不对的.
你应该根据要强调的部分来选择从句,比如你要强调stronge ,就得改成Those old men who are doing exercise there look very stronge.