求高人看看我的英语自我介绍作文写得有什么问题 帮我改下

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求高人看看我的英语自我介绍作文写得有什么问题 帮我改下
Hellow evebady my name's Liu xin yi.garaduated from primary school zhao ming.I'm 13 year's old .I like palying guiter and radeing book.I think the book a house of gold oniy radeing we can progrss,so I love radeing book.tank you.

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1,Hello everybody2,名字后应该为,graduated3,学校名应大写首字母4,playing the guitar5,readingI think a book is a house of gold.We can't make any progress without reading,so I love reading books.Thank you...